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Thursday, September 2, 2021

I should be able to stay up late

I feel i should be able to stay up late 

Firstly i am nearly 8 years old so that should allow me to stay up later little kids go to bed early .

Secondly we are always busy with school and after school hobbies that when i go to bed i like doing my puzzle books with my mum and if i stay up later i get more time with her to do it .

I feel i do lots of jobs around the house to help out my mum and dad and big kids do that so i should get a later bed time .

For these reasons i feel its only fair that from now on i get to stay up late .
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1 comment:

  1. Michelle WrightSeptember 6, 2021 at 8:19 PM

    Hi Ella,

    I really enjoyed reading your persuasive writing. You have made some very good points, as to why you think you should get to go to bed later. I especially liked that it means you can spend more time with mum. What was the outcome? Did you get to go to be later?

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